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12/18/2012

Rachel

12/18/2012 07:05:55 am

My third reason is cats are very important
Fact #3You were in big trouble if you hurt a cat in ancient Egypt. Your punishment could be death
Exapmle #3 The ancient Egyptians believed that cats had magical powers.
That’s why cats are better than dogs

Emily

12/18/2012 08:25:22 am

Dogs are better then cats. you can train a dog better then a cat. A dog knows when your sad and will try to help. A dog can protecd your home better then a cat.

Elisa

12/19/2012 06:48:12 am

good job

Parker

12/18/2012 09:49:49 pm

School Days Should Be Shorter

School should be 1 hour shorter because I would have more time to practice hockey (sports). According to the Hockey Canada website there are over 500,000 kids of varying ages registered to play hockey in Canada. A study from the Globe and Mail newspaper shows that kids that are physically fit have the highest test scores. Researchers at the University of Southern California questioned 1,200 sixth, seventh and eighth graders about their smoking behavior. The team found that the more sports the kids played, the less likely they were to smoke.

If the school day was shorter it would allow for more personal and family time. There would be less stress for kids. Kids would be able to spend more time at home with their parents. It would give kids more time to read and study and watch movies. Kids would be able to do their chores at home and have time to play in the evening.

If the school day were shorter schools would cost less. Less money needed to operate the school. Taxes would be lower because it would cost less to run the school. Teachers would also have more time to plan and review assignments.

Matthew

12/19/2012 06:50:31 am

You do not have to get all your snow gear on, go out for one minute and have to take all your snow gear off. You do not have to take a cat for a walk.

The last reason is cats have quiet feet to sneak around. If dogs walk you can hear them coming. Cats can sneak up on people. Dogs can’t sneak up on people.

In conclusion, cats are better than dogs. Cats can do a lot more things than dogs but they don’t because they want to be cared for more. You do not have to take a cat for a walk. Dogs can’t sneak up on people.

Elisa

12/19/2012 07:01:29 am

How to persuade your parents that you are permitted to have a pet:
First of all, you have to prove that you're responsible. Here are a few ways you can do it:

Do your chores when you're supposed to don't wait until you're asked twice .
Do your homework on time and keep your grades up
Keep your room clean.
Take good care of your things.
Be respectful of other people's feelings, privacy, and stuff.
Keep your promises. If you say you're going to do something, like take out the trash or babysit your little sis-do it.

Resons why:
Pets make lovable friends
Pets teach you how to take care of others
Pets teach you about responsibility
A pet can help you learn about animals
Playing with pets can make you feel happy
Having a pet can keep you from feeling lonely or depressed
Pets are good for your health

Fact #1 Studies show that people with pets live longer, have less stress, and fewer health problems. (Source: American Pet Product Manufacturers Association)
Fact #2 94% of pet owners say their animal pal makes them smile more than once a day. (Source: i-pets.com)
Fact # 3 Pet lovers are guardians to nearly 100 million dogs and cats in the United States, and spend about $35 billion on their furry friends each year. (Source: American Pet Product Manufacturers Association)

Katelyn

12/19/2012 07:26:17 am

A 50 inch T.V. is better than a 10 inch book. The first reason is T.V. is more ineretesing. The second reason is some T.V. shows are not on books. The third raeson is you can play games on a T.V. but you can't do that with books.

The first raeson is T.V. is more ineretesting than books. T.V. is more ineretesting than books because A picture is worth 100 000 words.

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