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45 Comments
NOAH.M
6/13/2013 12:00:11 am
The best part of my poster was my picture because it was my best picture that I ever made. And it had the most detail.
kaleb
6/13/2013 12:01:30 am
My faverit part of my poster is my alte et ending it is so so cool.and my second faverte part is my picture.I am a really slow reader and tiper.
kaleb
6/13/2013 12:02:50 am
I would imprve on my altement ending.
kailyn
6/13/2013 12:05:12 am
The best part of my poster is my new ending for my story. The reason why I think it's the best is because what I use in my story.
Noah Leclerc
6/13/2013 12:05:43 am
the best part of poster was the alternate ending because I really like changing changing up the end of the story I find that very fun for me. So now I'll tell you a bit about my alternate endingTrevor wanted to get Mr. Grenville of the so we went to the local pound to get him the dog. But and Trevor went to the Herald he could only pick out five so he got some other dogs for the other seniors.
Elizabeth☻♠♥☺╩∟
6/13/2013 12:06:22 am
I think the best part of my poster was the ultimate ending because you could get creative and do what any ending you want. You could say their is a green alien with orange polka dots, or you could just make a regular ending... On my poster I think I should improve getting more pictures, because I have like no pictures. I think I should take more time to colour my title.
NOAH.M
6/13/2013 12:06:44 am
it would be good to add to my summary because i get a better mark for language and the liturtare circle roles.
Kyle
6/13/2013 12:07:02 am
The best part of my poster was my picture because that picture was my best picture I drew. Also because it was about children taking action. Also because thats what happened in the story. The thing I could improve on is my alternate ending because I could hardly see it and it was messy. Another thing that I could improve on is taking care ofmy project and not scrunching it up. Also I could work on making my summary and alternate ending more clear so if someone read it it would make more sense and people could see it better. Thats what I would improve on and what I liked about my poster.
annabelle ☺☻
6/13/2013 12:08:06 am
The best part about my poster is the ending because there is a lot of chocolate and it can be as funny as you want and you make it up your self. The ending can be happy or sad ending, because its your ending and I made mine really funny and some people maby make theres really sad.
EMMA B <3
6/13/2013 12:08:20 am
The best part of my poster is my drawing. It is the best part because it is very detailed and full of colour. Its very pretty to . That is the best part of my poster!!!!!
noah leclerc
6/13/2013 12:08:20 am
and this is what I would like to improve on his bottled like to improve on the coloring of the picture because I did not think I did as well as done this on it. I also think I could've improved Arbitron is a drug was a little bit scratchy but I will do better next time
Katelyn
6/13/2013 12:08:42 am
The best part about my poster is the ending. I liked the ending because it was funny
Katelyn☺☻♥
6/13/2013 01:05:34 am
and lots of people liked it. Something I need to do better next time is my illustraton because I kind of rushed.
nico
6/13/2013 12:08:56 am
the best part about my poster is the diffrent ending because i wrout a lot and because i explaned it a lot. i used periods in my diffrent ending and i liked the diffrent ending because i aded a lot af action
Rachel Stacey
6/13/2013 12:09:08 am
My best part of my poster is my ending. Its my best part because its really intresting. I really like aliens so I put a alien in my story! I also like friends so I maid trevor and the ailen friends.
kaleb )(
6/13/2013 12:09:08 am
i would pit
Elisa
6/13/2013 12:09:17 am
I will improve on looking at the class because I always look at the paper and I always mess up on my words and I always mess up on my work and that is what I will improve on.
James
6/13/2013 12:09:22 am
I think the best part of my poster is my alternate ending. It's the best part because it's not to scary it's not that calm its like a thirller cause you dont know what's going to happen next. The story has the kids talking back and forth and a described scentances.
Caleigh
6/13/2013 12:09:23 am
the best part of my poster is my picture because the picture that I drew for my poster the the best and the most detailed picture I have ever drawn and I think I need working on is my
Tia
6/13/2013 12:09:30 am
The best part of my my poster is my drawing. I think that my picture is the best part because of how colufull it is. Also because it has people talking to each other. Another reson is because of the way I drew the ice floe. That is why I like this picture.
Tia
6/13/2013 01:10:42 am
I think I should improve on my summary. I think this because I did not put alot of details. Also because I should have made it longer. That is why I should inprove .
Jason
6/13/2013 12:09:39 am
what I like about my poster is. My ULTIMATE ENDING because I put so much work in it I had to think about my endinng because I
Jason
6/13/2013 01:06:42 am
and I would improve my summary because its not good at frist because I copyed the back so opps!!!
paige
6/13/2013 12:09:44 am
my favorite thing on my poster is my orange whale drawing and my really very super detaield pic to be continued
Grace♠♦◘
6/13/2013 12:10:04 am
I think that the best part of my poster is my 2 pictures.I like the jasper on he's bead and the careing picture.I also really like my super ending.I like my super ending because it has a lot of cany in it and because it has raining crested geckos lepard geckos and gila monster.....
kassandra
6/13/2013 12:10:04 am
The best part of my poster is the drawing of the tree because if i didn't draw the tree it would just look empty! Also the best part of my poster is the Alternet ending because:it had alot of exitment when the tornado missed the rose bush by one inch and when the rose bush whent under water!those are the exiting parts in my story!the thing i could aprove on is the couring on the letters!that is my two ansers!!!
Mackenzie <3
6/13/2013 12:10:04 am
The best part of my book is my drawing. Because it is detailed and a great picture. it is also full of colour. It's showing Trevor is helping Mr. Graville look out the window to see the dog outside.
Mackenzie <3
6/13/2013 01:21:56 am
I think I need to improve on my new ending because when I read it I think it was not my best work. I think I should not have had the narater the caruters sould of spok more. I also thank i should of had more twist. that is what i thean i should improve on.
cameron SHHHHHHHHHH!cameron SHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
6/13/2013 12:10:12 am
1)my favorite part is my different ending. And when they beat up pex pooper. And also when super pup fell in toxic whaste.
cameron
6/13/2013 01:03:11 am
and also that my summery should have a better ending.
Emily☺
6/13/2013 12:10:27 am
The best part of my poster is my super ending because it's long. it has not very meny errors
Emily☺☻
6/13/2013 08:30:32 am
I also think The best part of my poster is my super ending because is not boring. It is funny. It is cool because I made it up.
☺☻♥
6/13/2013 08:34:05 am
A.B
6/13/2013 12:11:57 am
The best part of my poster was my alternate ending because alot of
parker
6/13/2013 12:12:31 am
I like my summary the best because I wrote more and put more effort in to it more then enthing. And so on
annabelle
6/13/2013 01:05:39 am
Next time on my poster I can improve puting more detail in my ending and in the summary. because I put detail but not enough to make my summary and the ending long enough to make it very interesting.
paige lvveo ty os ucmh
6/13/2013 01:06:09 am
i could make my story a littel bit longer and funnyer
emma.w
6/13/2013 01:09:51 am
My favourt thing about my poster is that i like the window outside it has hills, bush's, a tree,sky and sun.i like it becuse that was the only one that i think it was good. I think can imoprove onmy super doper ending becuse i don't think i was creative enfe
caleigh
6/13/2013 01:10:37 am
and my summiery I think it needs more ditial
A.B
6/13/2013 01:12:20 am
The part i could work on is my summerizer because it was not that long . It does not have enogh information.Its not vere good right now
nico
6/13/2013 01:20:48 am
what i need to improve on my poster i need to organized my poster more i need to write more on my summry i need to think more to get a beter grade.
Emma B.
6/13/2013 02:41:07 am
I need to improve on my poster the details regarding decorations around my poster because it is empty in the corners.
Emma B
6/13/2013 02:58:30 am
Also the best part is the chocolate river of course!!
Adam
6/17/2013 10:28:50 am
The best part of my poster is the the title of it because it is so colurfull Leave a Reply. |
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